Monday, April 18, 2011

Tom W Bowling in the Rough

Cranked this out over the weekend. I'd love to get some feedback.


  1. I think its really good. You can really feel the weight of the bowling ball. I would suggest though, when he picks it up and it swings out and pulls him toward the lane, that you have him stumble more (around frame 95). Also change his line of action the opposite way and have him push backwards with his feet. His feet could be sliding to keep it very cartoony. I hop I'm explaining this well enough. Good job!!

  2. really REALLY cool. If I can put my two cents in, it looks like you have lots of good ideas here. if you can make sure one idea reads (settles) before you go on to the next idea.

  3. Thanks for the suggestions, guys! I'm hoping to make revisions when I get the chance.